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This is the tale of a bold little fox
Miles Prower is his name.
His incredible smarts and mechanical skills
Were what shot him to fame.
A great many stories have been told
About this brave young hero.
So much is he honoured it’s hard to believe
That he was once a mere zero.

Miles was just a baby when
He first saw Sonic run past.
He yearned to dash alongside him.
He knew he had to go fast.
Since he couldn’t catch up with Sonic,
He gave it another try.
He needed just to spin his two tails
And off and away he’d fly.

Sonic and Miles made one great team.
They were truly out of sight.
Their courage and their deadly moves
Gave all their foes a fright.
Sonic, he kept things moving,
He kept things in good shape.
And if danger reared its ugly head,
Miles would help him escape.

This little fox whom we call Tails,
Brave beyond his years,
Gave his best in everything
And conquered all his fears.
The odds were against him at the start
When he was just a zero,
But he fought back strong and he fought back hard.
Indeed, he is a hero.
A tribute to my favourite Sonic character, Miles 'Tails' Prower. :)
This one's in a slightly different format from most of my other poems. Now, only the even-numbered lines of each stanza rhyme.
Sonic the Hedgehog belongs to SEGA.
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Tails-Is-FLUFFY Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Short poem that packs a huge punch.
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SupaSonicSiMCraft Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :) and thank you for the fave too!
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RagingFurry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
I found errors: "He (yearned) to dash alongside him."
() = Error
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SupaSonicSiMCraft Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What's wrong? The whole stanza is in past tense...
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RagingFurry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Yearned or Learned?
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SupaSonicSiMCraft Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yearned, as in wanted really badly
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RagingFurry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Oh ok.
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EvilGuanXing Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful. :_)
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SupaSonicSiMCraft Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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ultamitetailsfan Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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